My group consist of myself and three other creative and bright young ladies, Chanel Ellison, Leslie Fail and Laure Ellenburg. We call ourselves CLLL, which is the first letter in our name. Our final project is coming along pretty smoothly. We have all collaborated very well together. We have been incorporating several tools in our final project such as Skype, Smartboard, Google Docs and iMovie to name a few. We did toss around several ideas until we all decided on one topic. The four of us are working great together on the project and are equally putting input to our final outcome. We are, to me, ahead of schedule and may be putting the final touches to our project this week so that we can focus on other classes. I am excited to be working with such a corporative group of talented and enthusiastic young ladies and look forward to our final product
"My group consist of myself and three other creative and bright young ladies,..." consisted instead of consist - also use a : not a ,
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